1. That
story had happened in Gatlin. 2. Ethan, 16 years of the age, was living his
boring life with his father and his housekeeper Amma. 3. The only change Ethan
had ever faced in his life was the last year when his mother passed away. 4. So,
during several days Ethan had been experiencing vivid dreams about a girl that
he did not even know. 5. Then, at the first day in school Ethan and his friend
Link knew that the new girl Lena Duchannes had appeared in that dim Gatlin. 6.
That girl was different than everyone else at Gatlin, and she was the niece of
Old Man Ravenwood - the town’s
looneybin. 7. One day, Ethan heard the well-known melody which he heard in his
dreams.8. It was unexpectedly that the melody was performed by Lena Duchannes.
8. Soon, the boy sped to the Ravenwoods and virtually knocked Lena
off her foot.
9. As a
result, Ethan understood that Lena was the
girl of his dreams. 10. The next day at school
Incident had
happened, when Emily with her friends disseminated lies and slander about Lena .
11. Finally,
because of those words, the window was broken and all broken glass was directed
to that talkative company.
GOOD!
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There is no need to enumerate sentences!
1. That story (NO 'had') happened in Gatlin.
2. Ethan, 16 years of (NO 'the') age, was LEADING his boring life with his father and his housekeeper Amma.